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Ooo... I did like this. Yes, it is fragmented, but it's done in such a good way...! I shall tell you why I liked it line by line and hopefully ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! :D With that said, I think your poem could stand some revision. It's not that the idea is bad -- I've read some very good ...

Let's take the point (x,y) in the space R2. Both x and y can go on to infinity and negative infinity, so there is an infinite amount of points that ...

I like purple...

Hello and welcome to YWS! :D I'm just going to run through your poem and hope that my comments might help you (and who knows -- maybe garner up more ...

Ahhh... this is a much better poem, I think, then the first one I critiqued. This one is different because it uses specific imagery and doesn't pretend to say anything ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! :D Falling out of love is like Falling from an airplane; For some reason, I don't really like simlies in poetry. Instead, I would rather ...

Looks good. A lot more professional than the last one, in any case. :D

Write "boy" on one bit of paper, "girl" on another and pick them out of a hat. Or go down the buttons on a shirt or something. Boy? Girl? Boy? ...

Hehe. Be sure to post here so I can see, Snoinky! ^_^ That's really cool. Psh. I have 5800+ posts and you're too lazy to find one? :P Egads. I ...

Yes! You heard that right! So, in my story The Unicorn Killers, one of the characters is going to be a new mommy! Aww... so cute. The question? What gender ...

Apparently I'm joining? Anyway! I'll probably start posting NEXT week due to OMGCRAZYFINALS, but still! Name: Larry Doolittle Age: 19 Height: 5'11" Weight: 150 Eyes: Brown Hair: Brown Phsyique: slim ...

Yeah but... race is a new concept that has only been around for a couple of centuries. O_o

Well... it's Christian to try to convert people because the less people in hell, the better. And since we believe that those who do not believe in God will go ...

Fun stuff! We always love a nice story about S&M, right? :P Anyway! One thing I thought was weird was that the guy really didn't seem like he was 23 ...