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Nah. He's awesome. You see, the Romeo and Juliet thing happens all the time, even without the story. Two lovers have feuding families and they are never allowed to be ...

If you want to save time, you could always use spell checker on YWS to get everything pretty. ^_^ Because, if you want to get any good critiques, most times ...

Oh dear... this is an old poem, LOL. Anyway, it's not just the details, but rather how the details are strategically placed. For instance, I can say that the grass ...

l put off reading this at firsts but now l wish l hadn't. This is really awesome stuff, Gummy. I thought it was a little gory too, but still! Amazing ...

Hehehe...when I was thirteen, I was in the same situation. On one hand, I wanted to complete this book and on the on the other hand, I wanted to pursue ...

I'll try....... >.< And believe me, it WILL be hard for me to get out from my SANCTUARY, my SHELL :shock: But think of all the writing material you'll stumble ...

MATH! At the moment, I'm mulling over the thought of sub infinities. That is, infinities within a greater infinity. If you could explain this, you could possibly have an explanation ...

DUDE. Okay, I have finals this weeks, right? Which means that most of the tests are only two hours long. So I have three tests which are two hours or ...

Hehehe, well, first of all, DON'T go to PublishAmerica. ;) With that said, those who are teens go to pretty much the same agents and publishers who publish adults. By ...

what are the bitty things crawling about the ship n the second picture? I'm most intrigued Kittens. The people in SPEW eat kittens (they're having a protest barbeque of kittens ...

Mmmm... no spamming. Anyway! Dino dino dino rocks my socks. :D That's my favorite, that is. I think you might want to do more animals? *pokes*

LOL! Nice to see someone who is very succinct. ;) Welcome! :D

DUDE, this is awesome. :D The only thing I would want is to see the whole picture for #3. ;)

...how can they have chains if they have no necks? *muses* Nah, thanks for the comments! :D

Part of the beauty of the original poem was the shortness of it all. This one just goes on and on. Take your favorite idea and run wild with it.