Snoink

Um... yeah. Blinging fish.

Wow... now that I think of it, YWS stole my idea too. How scandalous! :o Welcome to YWS, in any case. ;)

Maybe if we spam enough... :D

My writing only got good when I turned 18, because then I didn't have to worry about the parents. Even though they really didn't care about me writing... it was ...

Have fun with it. I don't know whether you intend to publish this or not, but if you want to add more, you always can. Later, as you get involved ...

*Moved to Lounge*

...I'm not sure whether I should laugh or cry. Probably both.

It's too... overdone. Like, I know that this is poetry, but it is narrative poetry and that means that the story has to be just as strong as the poem, ...

Yeah. Some posts are missing because of the transfer. YWS had to be moved to another server temporarily as it was taxing system resources. In the process of the move, ...

Eep! You must format your story into paragraphs if you want any helpful critiques. O_o

Now that's even more disturbing...

Thanks for spotting the typo! It was right when I wrote it down on paper, but alas! It didn't transcribe. :D Yes... hehehe... too much physics. ;)

Inner Snoink? Oh dear...

...white? Everything is colourful! :o ...yes, I did that on purpouse.

Just because it tastes like strawberries doesn't mean it is a strawberry. :P