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Pause, look at the class, and then continue reading. But really. Pauses are good.

Two lines I have problems with... you're killing me on the inside It's never the end of the road The reason why I have this problem is most of the ...

Aw... lol. Well, seeing as I liked the second part better because of more vivid imagery and a personal touch, put that more into it? ;)

Sadly, we don't have a center feature, so I took that out for you. If there's any other formatting issue, you can always add it yourself. ;) This was a ...

Hehehe, this was fun. :D Just a small suggestion... instead of calling it "IT" maybe you can treat it as a name and calling it "It." ...that had too many ...

Thankus always Sammus! That one sentence is edited, thanks to you. :D And I'll keep the other stuff in mind when I tackle Unicorn Killers, all right? :D

Ahh... but Solomon is capitalized, no? ;) Hehehe... yes! Somebody got the Salome reference. Mwha.

with a single kiss... with a single kiss the temples topple and Solomon's head is served on a plate

Er... please never reveal your full name or location over the internet. It just isn't smart. *Thread locked*

*nibbles story* Er... first mechanics! Yep. So follow dialogue grammar because it IS your friend. Don't worry... I'll critique this a lot more thoroughly later. Still! Some quick suggestions: 1) ...

Too true. I thought Narnia was cool but MAN! His other works surpass Narnia easily.

And the moral of the story is BOOBIEZZZZZZZ!

J>> Glad you liked it! It's funny that you say it's abstract because it's based on something I actually saw. Kind of freaky, actually. O_o Rieda>> LOL! Oh no, this ...

Glad you liked it! ^_^ The girl, in my mind, is five or six years old. She may be older or younger, depending on what you perceived her to be, ...

"A Grief Observed" just rocks my world. Check out the beginning line: "No one ever told me that grief felt so like fear." Isn't that purely awesome? And WOW. I ...