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I think it's slightly confusing, actually. The narrator is going back and forth... one minute, she loves him, the other she's laughing at him, and... yeah. Confusing. Maybe if you ...

This is nice. I like reading your poetry. :D And I love the martyrs and tribal drum parts because they contrast very nicely with each other. :D

Hehehe.. and this is a closed forum, so for all our aspiring poets who don't want their work to be stolen, this may be what you're looking for. ;)

Hello and welcome t o YWS, first of all! :D I've been reading a lot of freestyle poetry lately, so this poem is pretty awesome to me. I like the ...

I think it's possible that someone who is as bad as Hitler can get to heaven. But I also think that heaven is beyond our wildest imagination and that anything ...

Dood. Speeling es over-ratted.

Hehehe, this is so funny because it is so true. Sometimes, you'll want a character that is a certain way but then the character just doesn't fit and you put ...

Hahaha, on the plus side, the more you think about it, the easier it gets. :D

Hahahaha... *looks at 5000 posts* Hmmm... Yeah.

:( The article is kind of long to post in full here, but he died on April 11, 2007. More of the story about him and his life is located ...

First book = pure awesomeness. Second book = Er... interesting? Third book = OMG. STOP PREACHING ALREADY. Of course, I read all of them, but the third book was just ...

Why is it failing? :?

Write it the way you want to, straight through. At the moment, I'm attempting to write a first-person fantasy and each subsequent attempt, it's worse, so just write how you ...

I think it doesn't. And the argument that it's due by carbon dioxide is a bunch of junk. If global warming does exist, then it's not by carbon dioxide but ...

AH! DANIEL! *glomps* I love it already. :D So it better be good!