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Post in the literary forums as new posts. It should automatically show up in your portfolio. :)

The F word is phyisics. Enough said.

Hahaha... I read the first fifteen pages of "Gone with the Wind" and now I'm hooked. Unfortunately, I didn't buy it! :( I threw 1984 down because Part Three made ...

Hehehe, this is nice! They've already pointed out the last stanza awkwardness, so I won't bother on it, but here's something I noticed: "Aye, but sir," quipped Poverty, "Perhaps I ...

Er... a question. Do you know it exists for sure?

[Moved to Lounge] 16. Er... work on my essay, apparently.

(Psst... this is a place to critique, not debate. ;)) This was a fairly interesting piece... not really an essay, but it definitely reminded me of a column of a ...

darn right titanic was a conspiracy. But he got it all wrong. There were mysterious lights reported that same day over the northern plains, and the reports of abductions saw ...

I got yelled at for writing in pencil all caps once... I'm scarred for life now. O_o

Discuss.

Yeah, essays and stories are very different. In essays, you mostly try to begin and end your paragraphs with topic sentences. Of course, in stories, anything goes as long as ...

He's alive in the painting? Yep...

...essays and stories are different? Indent for dialogue and emphasis.

Haha, love The Beatles references. One thing that you might check is how you set things up. It's almost like you're afraid that if you don't give every single detail ...

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