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Re: Sylvia Plath
Ah! I love her poem "Daddy." I mean, my first reactions to it were bad, but then as I thought about it more (and couldn't stop thinking about it) well... ...
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: Horrors of Lecraesa
OMG. I DID NOT READ THAT. YOU COULD NOT HAVE KILLED STRICK. *whimpers and hides away*
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: Who's afraid of the snow?
Or maybe because they haven't seen it yet?Query letters might possibly take a while. Still! It looks like soon I shall read Chionophobia in all its glory, which is good ...
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: WTF #1
I chose two random names, don't worry, so I have nothing against Mitch. And that was only really because I didn't know the second person's name and... yeah. :P Kind ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Abused
Hmm... First of all, word choice! You wrote "shovel slams" which... I like the shovel part, but I don't like the verb, just because when I hear the word "slams" ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Fever Dream *removed*
My favorite lines were these: His eyes... Wait. He had no eyes from which to see, This is because they seemed more true to the poem. The poem is wandering, ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Blood On The Stage
Aw... being depressed sucks. :( But! I shall critique nonetheless. I'm glad you're putting your depression to a good use like this. :D First of all, I like the theme. ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Human Eventuality
Yay! This was refreshingly funny. One thing that you might want to do is to space it out into paragraphs, because some of our critiquers go into spastic fits when ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: The Dragon Decsends
Yes, I like it too. Very descriptive. :D You're definitely going to want to add more in this and maybe post it in the story section. One very nit-picky thing ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: WTF #1
Er... you might want to think about making this grammatically correct, i.e., put punctuation and capitalize things. And why is it so colorful? Okay... onto the story! I like the ...
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Adventures in Photography
I have to say... the duckie picture is my favorite.
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: YWS Pensword
XD 10/10 for originality! I would like to see a fanfic of this. ;)
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Query letters...
Search Google on how to write query letters and then panic because you're not a published author and therefore you can't brag about your credentials? :lol: Okay, seriously? Tell them ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Reviewing reviewing!
Critique other people's work and make sure it's a good critique. There are several writing tutorials on how to write good critiques -- use those. Also, if it helps, find ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Notes on FREAK
Nobody so far. I finished my query letter, but I need to write my synopsis. But... I can do that over the spring break, hopefully.
Apr 3, 2007