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Sorry Tassen Spellbinder but I just had to bring it forward here, So okay the Monkey won, by 3 or something right? Tassen Spellbinder came up with the brilliant idea ...

Flip a coin between A and B? ;)

I think many of the adjectives are misplaced. For instance, "gusty." I like the word, but it really does nothing for the poem. Instead, I would like to see more ...

First of all, the prologue is like a script description of a guy. Seeing as you're not doing a screenplay, drop it. It's more interesting in the first chapter anyway. ...

I don't know if this is true or not, but the wording is such that the main character appears to be female. I'm not quite sure why, it just screams ...

I don't like the first two lines because they seem superflous. I know you're talking about God, but it really isn't necessary to say this as obviously as you're doing, ...

Hehehe, the monkey obsession was because our new mascot is monkey! However, I seem to have a pig fetish... Welcom to YWS!

Yep! I'm from the US, but there's some people in every continent just about. Heck, we have one gal fairly active girl who lives in South America. :)

Lord knows I haven't read this story from all the way through, but the beginning caught me, so I looked at the first part (not all of it since I ...

I outline... somewhat. I have an excellent memory, so most of the details stay in there, but I do write it out. Usually, I remember what I'm going to write ...

Oh! So it's 5000+ posts? Dude! That's crazy.

I think I'm the only writer of legend on this site. O_o

Okay... the summary has been revised: Summary for FREAK: When a freak living in an overcrowded slum is sold to a wealthy politician to be a maidservant of his teenage ...

No wonder smaur would kill you! She doesn't like names capitalized, and you did just that. ;)

Toast, of course. - Pearl - To lick off. -- Sadie's father Off what? No wait, don't answer that. I don't want to know. -- Daniel Would you hunt wild ...