Snoink

Oooooo... after one skimming, this looks pretty awesome. I'm going have to read it in my spare time. ^_^ Just one comment: I know it's long and you don't want ...

Oh shoot a quick P.S.: Steve Martin!!! I feel so bad I forgot him, but if you haven't read anything by him you NEED to, Shopgirl or The Pleasure of ...

T he red light of sunset drowned the Eastern Provinces, and in the town of Leurs, a ruddy-skinned man of middling age lifted his gaze to the crimson face of ...

So pretty! I love the colors... and everything. ^_^!!

I'll tell you my impressions of the story first. So basically, it's going to be pretty depressing as I label what's wrong and go on and on. So expect to ...

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OMG... the best you've come up with? I can't wait. :D

Once, during Halloween. I was Vampira, just to piss off my mom. Does that count? -- Pearl Do you like rain?

Oh! No, a lot of my writings are on http://www.snoink.com, but not FREAK. The quote in my signature actually belongs to "The Death Parlor," not FREAK. FREAK is finished and ...

Infections --> Gangrene --> non-treatment for a certain amount of time --> required amputation. Look it up! ^_^

Eep! The curse continues... I always forget a word in any of my stories I write. XD ALWAYS. But I put "anything" in. Hopefully it makes sense now. When you ...

I sometimes think I use semicolons too frequently, but I guess that's better than constantly comma splicing? :roll: While I'm thinking about it, maybe you can help me with something ...

Oooh, good questions, Snoink. Like Sureal, I don't like the idea of an abortion simply because characteristics of the child aren't desirable. I guess I would mostly apply this to ...

We were bored and he was flipping through channels as quickly as he could. Flick! A picture of two people about to kiss. Flick! A car commercial. Flick! Judge Judy! ...