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So! The specs, since some people have asked... In manuscript form, it's about 640 pages. In word count, it's 120,360. Fun? Fun! So... what have I done with it? Not ...

Hahaha, maybe I'm good enough, but the question is, am I too lazy to? ;) We'll find out soon! Trimmed up some of the fat... hopefully it's looking somewhat cleaner. ...

I won't waste my time stating the obvious... that's you're an excellent writer with compelling fiction and the like. Instead, let's get picky. Some of them had been left. In ...

Things to think about: 1) You're not a bad writer. 2) It doesn't make sense to me that Lev is a painter. Maybe that he poses as a painter, but ...

gyr>> glad you liked it! :D Phorcys>> aw... first person can be quite horrible at times if you don't connect with the main character. ;) Jiggity>> I would, I guess, ...

Cookie of LOVE! I knew it... you were contributing to the obesity epidemic! :o ...evil Canadians. Yes. Run on sentences, in dialogue can be your friends. I remember, in FREAK ...

Hahaha... mod's attention gotten. Moved to Debate and Serious Discussion usergroup by request. Also, if you want to participate in this thread still, you're going to want to join up ...

Oooo... Mesh in prose? I can't wait. *licks chops*

Yeah... you noticed that too, Jacke? ;) What's Davy and Di about? And try not to jump to project to project... get something done! :D

Grr... yeah. You have to update it because I keep on procrastinating on giving a critique, and if you've edited to make it all pretty and stuff, I want to ...

Hehehe! But local stuff does count! Though... hmmm... did you get any money off of it? ;) When writing queries, make references to the local stuff. Yeah, it's not much ...

It was a little bit before Easter midnight mass and we were supposed to be quiet, subdued things in pretty clothes and halos. For we were about to be confirmed! ...

The painting is okay. To make it better, try adjusting the light. It probably looks a lot better in real life than by photo, so adjust the effects in Photoshop ...

Stuff you HAVE to fix This is the stuff that I found on one read-through. Haha. With that said, before you post something, you're probably going to want to read ...

Hahaha... I *knew* this was going to happen soon! ... I mean, congrats Mesh! :D