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Re: Title Feedback
Hehehe... I don't like foreign language titles... :P It reminds me of apathetic spiders. Don't ask. EDIT: It reminds Mom of a pathetic apricot. I don't think it really caught ...
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
[b]Watch. I'm no good at leading and it would all end in disaster, so that's the safest thing. That way, I don't hurt anyone. How much time does it take ...
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
It reminds me of fishing through a bowl of alphabet soup. Something funny and very light. :D And definitely a short story... --- The Witch of Cornerstone Drive
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: Made-to-order genetic defects in embryoes
How very freakish... :?
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: Gorgeous
I am about to speak when suddenly Snoink presses a button. "Ah good, past tense again!" she said happily. "What about that button?" "What button?" "The one I just pressed." ...
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: Journey Into the North
*Ursa* Dragons, as a general rule, smell really bad. Its not really a fault of their own, seeing as they can't help who they are, but that didn't make them ...
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: Gorgeous
And, with the dictionary, the thesaurus was closing in fast! Quick! Rapidly! Swiftly! Hastily! Speedily! Briskly! Fleetingly! Nonslowly!-- WHACK! Didn't we give you an IV of George Orwell? "Ugh?" "He ...
Jan 2, 2007 -
Re: Player Piano
Okay... so people kept asking me whether I read Kurt Vonnegut Jr. and I kept wondering who he was. Well, I finally decided to read him. So I went to ...
Jan 2, 2007 -
Re: Musings of a Statue
Okay... I've updated it with all my revisions. Better?
Dec 30, 2006 -
Re: new
Hola! Me llamo Snoink (en YWS) y soy una moderadora de YWS. Escribe un poco español, pero estudié solamente para dos años. Bienvenidos a YWS! :D
Dec 30, 2006 -
Re: Chionophobia #2 /P
I love the way Kyle was introduced because it was so in character that it seemed to flow. Like, he got his way. The introduction was also rather inviting. This ...
Dec 30, 2006 -
Re: Chionophobia #1 /P
Her exposed back—bereaved from the duty of making love—heaved, frightening Kyle in the way young boys are frightened of seeing porn for the first time. I thought this description seemed ...
Dec 30, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Usually, try to ignore it. Eventually, it does go away. -- Daniel If asked to slaughter an animal, what would you do?
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: A Heart So White
Hahaha... you already know I love your work. Just a question... the only random part seems to be the very introduction. What exactly is her motive for suicide? She doesn't ...
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Women should stand up to the oppressive men who run our government today! It's bad enough that we have no voice, but for slavery to exist in such a blatant ...
Dec 29, 2006
