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Hehehe, I'm going to critique a critic's critique of my critique! :o ... or explain myself better, anyway. :P Eeeh, okay, I'm not goint to critic a critic, BUT -I ...

Welcome to YWS! I hope you have fun here, both in giving comments and receiving them. ;) A few general comments: The word "grotty" should be shot in any story. ...

I'm not shallow! -- Sadie Dude. If he doesn't look good, then he doesn't look good. -- Pearl First of all, you got to have some nice legs. Everything else ...

I think teachers try to teach meaning in only one way because they want to have people know that meaning can and does exist. However, I don't see how they ...

Never trust a unicorn. -- Pearl Random girls that pop out of nowhere and will not shut up should be avoided for health reasons. -- Tristram Apparently, having two lovers ...

Hehehe, I think you're better as a novel writer, Adam. ;) ...I should probably explain that, shouldn't I? Okay. Look at the scope of the story. It spans, not just ...

The Incan Shark strikes again, lol! When dealing with cutting, it's best to be subtle about it. I've seen a lot of poems dealing with blood and how it flows ...

Eep! Never delete! But, if you ever want to get anything finished, you have to finish it. It's simple and the advice might sound ridiculous, but it's true! Just keep ...

Sometimes, sometimes not. Like, there's plenty of nonsense poems that exist, not to impress with meaning but to just play with words. But after a while, this sort of poetry ...

Hehehe, limericks aren't really supposed to mean anything, but they're sure fun to say! :D I think the poem has one or two more syllables than it should per line. ...

Please keep this civil. No critiquing critiques... all responses are valid. ;)

Hahaha... I did this and came up with my best draft for a beginning of Unicorn Killers yet! Mind you, it still sucks and needs to be edited to death, ...

Hahaha... but we love John Lennon! The first part, my eyes were wandering, looking desperately for plot. It was the second part I read all the way through because it ...

I'm going to write a ballad about one of my heroes in The Unicorn Killers. Exciting? I think so! Unfortunately, this means I have to know how to write a ...

Hmmm... I thought that the character development was a little over the top. First of all, why would Lily think Rose is her friend after everything they do? I don't ...