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...how is it that you can make a rape scene sound so pretty? Nice stuff as usual. :D

Umm...should I use this thread or the other thread? Hahaha... I'm a little confused on that too. XD I think the other thread is for characters?

Haha. Or, you could say, "Screw Grif because he hasn't finished any stories anytime soon and his character development is horrendous, so why am I listening about his comments on ...

Okay! I need three major things of information for my newest project! If anybody can help, I will love you forever. Or something like that. 1. Sheep Do any of ...

Hehe! Okay, so I compiled a list of literary stuff that inspired FREAK in some way or another. :D The Moon is a Harsh Mistress, by Robert Heinlein Farmer in ...

*Ursa, aka Podgy* Okay. That was it. Everybody here was a moron, and by everyone, I mean everyone. And by everyone, I mean...you get the picture. So. Apparently we were ...

Hehehe... the reason why there's hardly any first person narratives is because it's harder to write.

Hahaha... don't be mean, Adam. It might be your idea, but it's free game for anyone since it's so vague. I could probably use it and you wouldn't even notice ...

A little bit of both, I would imagine. Anything's better than indifference. -- Shea Are you embarrassed by your mistakes?

Hehe... yeah, a little. At the time, when it was rainy and miserable, it seemed right, though, without the miserable sky and everything, it doesn't quite look right, LOL.

Hehehe... I got it! Except I didn't... more on that later. I think this might be better, though I'm sure you can make it better still: Giggled gleefully at almost ...

Well... yeah. That sort of showing vs. telling might be applicable to poetry, but in stories, it sort of falls through. If I go on continously about my heorine's eyes ...

Maybe this helps? It's in a usergroup, which means you can't post in it unless you join the usergroup first, but the information there might be helpful to you nonetheless. ...

Didn't I say I shall be frank? ;) Okay. The beginning sucks as it is. I know you want us to feel emotional about Michael and everything, but it's so ...

Or, better yet, make love! That's always a good way to keep everyone satisfied. -- Daniel Nay. War is a constant fact of life, so why should we hide from ...