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Re: Untitled Intro
No. Those are NOT passive sentences. Those are what we call past imperfect sentences, and they are good. Yes. Good. If you use them right. What they do is indicate ...
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Re: Character Answer Game
My life would make a boring story. -- Sadie's father How would you decorate your house?
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Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, the answer is 42. But what is the question? I wish I was a grizzly bear!
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: Journey Into the North
Apparently I'm joining. Oh well. Hahah, I think you're going to hate me. Names: Ursa, Awesome Sharpshooting Fighter with Total SKILLZ of smelling and other cool stuff, Rolly Gender: Male ...
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: And they Call the wind Maria...
Hm... I've been thinking about this poem today, and I'm still trying to digest it. I'll come up with something tomorrow, but know that I'm not abandoning you, Elizabeth! :D
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
I've always wanted to fly. -- the freak A horse, of course! -- Daniel How fast of a learner are you?
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: The Blessed
Enjoy? Obedience to authority, loyalty to self, devotion to the cause. The life of a soldier. The life of this soldier. Ah... a philosophical musing in the beginning. The problem? ...
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but now you can't pay for anything else. I wish I could finish with this critique already! It's about eight pages so far, about to be nine, yeesh.
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: Lord of the flies
Er... hate to break it to you, but that format is pretty unreadable. You might want to edit it for those on the web instead of just your teacher. What ...
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: Kalum's Fire
Haha... um... yeah. Okay, maybe I've been reading too many nonfiction books lately, but OMG. And I know this is a piece for a competition written a long time ago, ...
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: A Battling Plane
Hmmm... One of the weird thing about this poem is the creative spelling. Sometimes, as in a nonsense poem, this works, but other times this doesn't. I'm not quite sure ...
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: A Waste
Hehehe, this was a fun read! Mind you, I would have been completely confused if I hadn't read the first paragraph that includes your explanation, but it was still fun! ...
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: Flyte's Song
Hehe, this should really be put in the lyrics section! I can always move it for you, if you want. And if you don't... well, it's made a nice home ...
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: Tarin and Naija
Heheh! Two Adams on a thread! :D Adam Atlantian>> Thanks! I was afraid it might be corny and stuff, but your assurance is always nice. ;) Myth>> Hahaha. The sad ...
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Underwear. You don't realize how much you love it until several days pass without any sign of laundry being done. And then, miracle of miracles, clean pants come at last! ...
Dec 16, 2006
