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Haha... yeah. I've been editing FREAK, and for the most part, I've been incorporating all the senses, but there was this one chapter that stuck out that didn't do this... ...

Hahaha... don't we love beautiful people who hate each other but end up falling in love? :D No, but you're right. Fun stuff! Though I suddenly want to critique your ...

Sureal, A critic's role is not to offer support. It is to point out where a piece needs work and, if the critic so pleases, how that might be accomplished. ...

It depends on the character and what's happening. For instance, "The Lady and the Unicorn" went overboard on description compared with "The Death Parlor" as far as setting goes, but ...

Apparently I have a great sex life ... news to me. I didn't think I had one at all. Yeah, I don't get that either. I think everybody just likes ...

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Haha! Double the gifts! *feels honored*

One has to wonder where this Christian Legacy came from then.

That way, too, I can motivate myself with the new project; once I'm done my crappy current piece, I can reward myself by moving onto a shiny new one. And ...

Hahaha... that's awesome! Love the weirdness of it. :) And the socks = awesome. :D

Also, please remember that your comments might actually encourage the writers to write more. You do eventually grow out of the bad crappy young writer stage, and then it's good. ...

Konnichiwa! 'Tis nice to have another 13-year old...we're going to take over the world someday, right? *pokes minions* RIGHT? *runs from scary 13-year-olds, who are old enough to be deviously ...

I... yeah. I usually think of three or four stories at a time, but I force myself to only write one story at a time. One novel anyway. Short stories ...

I could do it with one. I wish that I hadn't met that one girl. That way, I wouldn't go into politics, wouldn't have two different families, wouldn't meet Carolina, ...

I like how the bolded stuff was so typical and the normal stuff was told in an intense manner which was also fairly gripping. Though I know you like flowy ...