Snoink

The cold. -- the freak Don't rub it in... -- Daniel How good of a cook are you?

Me? I'm the best driver around! True, I can't really reach any of the pedals with my feet, but my tail does a nice job. -- Snarkindron No he isn't... ...

I think Lovely would be fine, as a noun. :D

Hehehe... I would add more description with the dialogue. For one, if this was nano, you want all the words you can yget! But that also helps the general flow ...

That encouraging people can be fun! :D

No! We love "murmured." And "added." And "replied." And "hissed." And... *flails*

I could make up a long introduction for you, but that wouldn't be right. ;) And yay! I remember that thirteen was a good year for me in writing. I ...

First of all, get rid of the quotes. As soon as you say the word "I" it indicates that you are saying it. Unless you were speaking to someone else, ...

Hehehe, then write bit by bit! Write little scenes that you see in your head and keep on writing these scenes. It's nice to see someone as creative as you ...

Nah, Mrs. Coulter has always been blonde to me. ;) Close second? Bah! The lame character deaths and random stupid character moments outweighs the actual coolness. Did I mention the ...

Nice list! :D And hahaha... sometimes, you won't want to use "said." It just determines which is prettier at the time. ;)

The words "positive" and "negative" are completely arbitrary, defined by the recipient of the critique. So therefore, writing about "positive" reviews vs. "negative" reviews is pointless, which is why

Incan -- Her language is simple -- don't over-read it. It is what it is. Your offense to it is silly. :P Best, Snoink

*sobs* My life is ruined now... But oh well. Don't kill everyone randomly... otherwise it's too predictable. ;)

Who are your main influences for writing? :D I have to say, one of mine is Bill Watterson . His stuff was one of the first I ever read, and ...