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Those pigs must have been very very hungry. They are omnivorous, which means that they eat both meat and vegetation, though they prefer the latter. Rarely, will they hunt down ...

"Through the westsdie of this town." Should be "westside." The first stanza is boring... I think it's these lines: We account bottlecaps and soda taps, To make a ledger of ...

Wait... so what is this style like? An idea: instead of the queen coming in to see what's happening, which might make an awkward scene worse (and she should know ...

Yeah, exactly. It is important to focus on the whole instead of the part, so though line-by-line critiquing can be useful, if the poem is written strangely and needs to ...

Yay, parody. ;) Welcome to the site, Michael!

All too frequently, there's this HORRIBLE story or poem and we look at it and say, "No friggin' way." Sometimes, we can just ignore it and let some other person ...

Shall I be blunt? ;) You're going for style, but you're not going for clarity. So, instead of Piers wandering around aimlessly, you are wandering around aimlessly, hoping that perhaps ...

Hehehe... this reminds me of some of the stuff I wrote when I was eleven. Except, I never wrote prologues, and I hated third person. And, of course, my stuff ...

YAY! GO CRYSI! :D

I also think (as has been mentioned countless times) that it's silly to argue with people who critique your poem or when you have, as they say down here in ...

Sometimes, on YWS, you will see a critique that just makes your blood boil and you want to put said-critiquer's head into a blender and just turn it on full ...

Hahaha... poor baby. :P I know my cousin just had her first baby and her mother told her that the baby was ugly. Which was... not cool. It's good that ...

Reviewers have no business telling the authors what they should do with their novel. Besides, if you "demand" things, then people usually do the opposite of what you demand. It's ...

To spruce up Squills a bit, Grif and I have decided to make a sporadically updated webcomic that will eventually include many of the YWS regulars... including featured member, of ...

My pinky. -- the freak I'll give you a hint... it's long and hard and very pliable. Yes! My nose. As you can no doubt guess, I have the worst ...