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Well, when you read it, it'll be forwards. I just want to write it backwards. ...ha. Too confusing?

Hahaha... FREAK is done-ish. Nah, the Unicorn story. :)

Yeah... I have a question. I'm thinking about writing the ending first and then progressively working my way to the beginning. Not that it'll actually be formatted so that it ...

Ah, it's the same thing with the whole world; people sometimes help others, but most of the time it takes a lot of effort so they selfishly promote their own ...

In the end, it's the people's desiscion what to do with him. They are the people he effected, not us. So it would be wrong for anyone HERE to make ...

I still owe you a critique... *flails* And having a mascochist view of writing is probably not a good thing. ;)

First of all, the grammar is kind of weird. If you have a cool English teacher, you might want to ask about using punctuation, where to put periods, and everything ...

Hehehe... you knew I was going to get to this eventually, right? ;) For this story, I think you're telling more than you're showing. So right now you're giving us ...

Psh. That doesn't make sense. Like, at all. :P

Yay! And she's read FREAK too! *is happy* Yeah, congratulations! :D

I like the dialogue, but it's MUCH too much dialogue and not enough action, so throw in some action within the dialogue and that will make it nicer. :)

Yeah, not all of them were crappy, but some of them were fit to be tied, beaten with a stick, and then killed in some horrible way, preferably by being ...

people should stop writing about him. his ego is big enough already. Hahaha... but this was in 2005, so he only gets a poem per year. :P

Hahaha... I should totally update this.

Hahahaha... you guys are rabid. :P And yay! Red vs. Blue... if that were a full feature movie, it would be flippin' sweet. :)