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Hahaha... The Chair ain't as long as FREAK, so ha. ;) Miwaki might give us both a run for our money though... ;)

[s]AHHHH! NOT ANOTHER CANADIAN![/s] Welcome! I. Can. Talk. In. Fragments. Too. But OMG, SO ANNOYING! Oh well. At least you eat grammar for Halloween. That's pretty fun. :)

Yo? I didn't know it was Japanese. They say it all the time in California... Anyway, welcome! And long stories? Eep. But long stories are all the rage here, lol.

You Are Capitalizing Every Word. It Is Annoying. So Don't Do It. Just Don't. Because We Love Lowercase Words Too. Yeah... so basically, capitalization usually ends up as something that ...

Only a little treason. -- Sadie's father. I had some cake once. -- the freak What makes you sneeze?

Hahaha... I'm totally like you. I get distracted with editing and YWS and all that stuff, so I end up not writing as much. I have no will. What I ...

I sleep too much. -- the freak What do you do when you get really really hungry?

Er... I had a dream recently that Nate was introducing snakes to Hawaii, so I think we have a new objective.

Grif has an entire graveyard of stories... it's quite sad. O_o

Hahaha... trust your readers! And besides, you think it's rushed because you know the WHOLE story. So you're aware of all the side plots, character movement, and everything. So when ...

Gah.. I tried editing it so that it would work, but I think I screwed it up. Can you try again?

Hahaha... FREAK is also very rushed. Especially towards the end... The freak looked at the bunny rabbits. DEATH! DEATH! DEATH! Sadness... First of all, remember to enjoy your characters. That ...

Oh my... I want your job. XD

As for me? I don't know... I think I had to get older to get better. Like, some of the topics that I'm dealing with now, I felt very squeamish ...

What's the memory? Maybe the traumatic aspect might help you set where it is. For example, if the traumatic memory was not getting straight A's, that would limit your character ...