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Re: Where Do YWS Members Come From?
Hahaha! I can see my house from here!
Oct 30, 2006 -
Re: A few questions I need help with...
Most civilizations have things buried underground. If you're thinking about doing a treasure hunt, you might consider uncovering something from an volcanic explosion that covered the civilization, lik
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Re: Sacred Honor
Hahaha... no then. [locked | Snoink]
Oct 30, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
I'm not quite sure yet, but I'll figure it out soon. -- Pearl Who's the stupidest person you've ever seen?
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Re: Sacred Honor
Um... sacred honor, anyone?
Oct 30, 2006 -
Re: The Incan Shark
Yay! Typo fixed. ;) I wrote it right on paper -- honest! XD
Oct 30, 2006 -
Re: The Incan Shark
He came from nowhere, Incan did From the murky depths of the sea. A primitive brain with a primordial yearning To eat all the poems he could see. While slinking ...
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Re: Television
Hehehe... okay. I think this poem would be better without the opinion inserted. For example, these two lines: a window to delusions of reality. I would cut them out because ...
Oct 29, 2006 -
Re: Paradise
This is definitely pretty and I like the imagery you come up with. :) You might want to try a little editing to make it prettier. It feels a little ...
Oct 29, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Eep. Diedrick scares me... And haha... you asked for it. Have a lot of sex. Who knows? Maybe one of the girls will be kind enough to kill me. -- ...
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Re: Excerpt (No Title)
Hmmmmm... Hehe! Okay. Let's look at Poe, shall we? :D This is the beginning of "Hop Frog": I NEVER knew anyone so keenly alive to a joke as the king ...
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Re: I Think of You
Okay... Every night I look at the stars, and I think of you. This seems to be the most interesting part of the poem, so you're going to want to ...
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Re: Being Seventeen
Not bad! One of the things that struck me about this whole piece was how randomly put together it was. Now this isn't bad, but I think you might be ...
Oct 29, 2006 -
Re: YWS INVADEZ RUSSKA
I'm a mod... And Lama: Change your siggy! NOW!
Oct 29, 2006 -
Re: Historical Contest: The Hanging
Okay... up to this one point, I'm fine. But then I get confused. I'm not sure why, but maybe you can tell me and stuff? ^_^;; Susan Merrick had hung ...
Oct 29, 2006
