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OMG. So we were at church, and then the choir sang "Amazing Grace." And I didn't think much of it at first, because I thought the song was over-rated, etc., ...

I thought the first paragraph was a little overdone, like you wanted to bring us in, but the rest of the paragraphs were beautiful in a simple way. Like, the ...

¡Ay de mi! Well, tomorrow has come and gone, and now I am stuck on a cliffhanger. This will never do.... The beginning is a little simple for my tastes, ...

It's not that long, and since it's already separated into sections, you can post it by section. ^_^;;

At the orphanage, I think. Everyone was sick. But you couldn't do anything about it. You just had to live. -- the freak If you had to lose a limb, ...

This seems more like an exercise in finding the words to say? At least, I do writing exercises with this sort of stuff all the time in poetry. Maybe you ...

OMG. The narration of this TOTALLY reminds me of "Sin City." I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not... I know that while I was watching "Sin City" ...

Oh, also - it's a personal preference, but I usually prefer to read "thirteen" and not "13" in actual prose. Unless it's a very large and very specific number (eg: ...

Oooo... clever! :D

I don't hate Tolkien, and in fact, out of all the writers out there, he's the closest one I can identify with. I've created languages for my characters and stuff ...

And filthy vermin. Nah, lol. According to the dictionary, vermin are those small creatures that we try to limit. But we breed pigs, thus making them NOT vermin. :)

Wow... Okay. So I cried during two chapters of FREAK -- that is, Chapter 20 and Chapter 50, not necessarily because it was sad (well... okay, Chapter 20 is pretty ...

I think that this topic should be put into the Debate and Serious Discussion forum because it is Obvious Serious, but I will trust your judgement on this one, not ...

Ooo! Rib roast! That sounds delicious. -- Daniel What was the longest time you had to hold your breath?

Hahaa!!! 4444 for me too! *glee*