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Hehee... this belongs in the fiction forums. ;) Not bad. The main chaacter seems very obsessive compulsive... she should be fun to play with later. :)

Yeah... it's a cute children's poem, but I don't know. I can see it more easily as a picture book with tons of pictures than anything that Incan would consider ...

It's not a matter of wishing anymore, fortunately. -- Daniel What was the farthest distance you traveled?

OMG... my main problem was conflict. When I first wrote FREAK, I decided to put absolutely no conflict in it. And it sucked. So, to compensate, I decided to put ...

I don't know. I've never tasted myself. Wouldn't that be cannibalism? -- Daniel There are other ways of finding out how you taste. -- Sadie's father Er... let's not go ...

Oh yes! The higher you go in math, the more proofs there are. It's crazy, really.

What about interjected, i like to use that one in a disscussion where some one cuts across the convosation. Nah. Interjected is too obvious to use. That is, when the ...

One hundred bottles of beer on the wall... -- Sadie Yeah... she's screwed up. But! Not just wrestling! MUD-wrestling! *flails* What childhood songs do you remember from your youth?

Yeah. But it's usually not my fault though! -- Daniel Would you ever go to a nudist colony for recreational purposes? If not, then what for?

Very old, I think. I'm twenty-two. - the freak And I'm very young at thirty-seven! -- Daniel Would you ever consider canabalism, if the conditions were extreme?

Me? Never. But that's why Daniel is truly a magnificent species. See this thick head of hair? Underneath this scalp is a brain that has never been used. No thoughts ...

By hand. I don't trust machines. Especially machines who claim to be humans. -- Sadie's father Oh, he'll never get over it, I think. It's one of those things that ...

The line breaks are too jerky and give the poem a feeling of stop and go traffic. Not to say you have to make it completely fluid, but as it ...

Er... wouldn't it be easier defining what "right" is first so then we can say everything else is wrong? Or does that make too much sense? -- Daniel YAY! He's ...

Left-handed means that you use your left hand. As for right? We're still trying to figure that out. -- Sadie's father Hahaha... he can't be avoided. What is right?