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Re: Life and death
What do you mean by 42? And being a christian, my beliefs about life after death are fairly obvious. Hehehe... you need to be more rounded in the great books! ...
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: hey
Yay! Poets! I write novels. I'm scawy. XD
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Untitled
Together we can drink in the glorious beauty that disappears within moments. Describe what the moments are like, and it'll probably become a little more fluid. Otherwise, lovely imagery! :D
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Demon overlord
Hehe! Very interesting idea. Try making it so we can see what's going on instead of you just telling us. ;)
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Existing In The World of The Living
No polls! Please! I beg you! Okay. With that said, onto the critique! This is one of those thing that is very internal. We hear about the internal anguish of ...
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Titles...
Er... I usually just take a phrase or something from the first chapter. So "FREAK" was named after "On one side in worn letters was “FREAK” and..." So yeah. Maybe ...
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Need Help
And remember, sometimes the best replacement for said is nothing at all. :) So like: "I have no idea what you're talking about." She rolled her eyes. "About the midterms, ...
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Until vs till?
Until Till I see "until" as a better bridge word than "till," if that makes any sense...
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: The Assassin King
Hmm... I'm not quite sure about this as a prologue. Usually, the prologues I like are those that are stories within the stories. For instance, let's take a look at ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: The Ritual
Hehehe... don't include polls in your story. Usually, I post in the "I hate it!" option, not because I actually hate the story, but because I hate the poll. If ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: Education of a Writer
Hehehe... yeah. I don't want to be an English major at all. In fact, the very thought makes me twitchy. I would rather do something cool like aerospace engineering or ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: Serious Work
Back in my younger days, I read some pretty depressing books, such as 1984 and Poe's work and other stuff. Well... they're not that depressing actually, but when I was ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: Interrupting Dialogue
Oh gosh... I was reading an earlier version of FREAK and it was SO BAD. I was literally cringing in my seat as I read it because it was so ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: First and Third person
Yeah... and the article fishr is talking about (I think) is here!
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: Please help me!
Oh yeah... the Empire strikes back is pretty awesome. So I chose that. But at the same time, I'm hesitant and sort of want to say Episode IV. Why? Because ...
Oct 22, 2006
