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Yeah. So this is a REAL chat conversation between me, my teacher, and a classmate in a creative writing class. We're supposed to write a one act play, and I ...

Is it just me, or is some of the best poetry from the past hundred years coming from Disney? Like this song... Look out! Look out! Pink elephants on parade ...

Gah! I love the prologue! You have to make that more a part of the story! That is the interesting thing. How does he interrogate him? How does he get ...

Maybe? It's mostly brown though... or auburn.

Plus! We have bears. With laser beams!

Great poem! I really enjoyed this! One issue I have is these two lines: worry not, sand is more precious than stars. Huh? I'm confused... Where did the stars reference ...

One person you can PM is fishr. She was in the same position you were in awhile ago, a couple of months, I think, and wanted to start writing. So ...

I knew you would say that! :o

Mmmm... Yeah. I actually like it that you altered the first line. It fits for its purpose. You edited it quite nicely, I think. And if you did the original ...

Write books? - Sadie's father Have you ever gone to school, and for what purpose?

Thanks! :D

I have no idea... O_o Probably conflicts and pace. I'm quite a sadist to my characters, lol.

Add topaz for brown. ;)

Repetitive and...not the best. Cute topic, though. Since when is a dog dying cute? O_o

Poor doggie. :(