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Stuff on Dialogue First... dialogue grammar! I wrote this article. Perhaps you'll find it useful? With that said, let's go to the actual way of supporting dialogue. Now I know ...

They’dll eventually end up in their own little groups. Should be "they'll." So even though their all in the same pot, Should be "they're" instead of "their." The homosexual that’s ...

OMG, this is funny to read, lol!

Hehe! :D

She's too devious though. ;) And ha! Lupin's in love! *laughs* Don't censor yourself. It's BITCH, dammit! :D

This doesn't seem like a full chapter -- for one, it's too short. Are your other chapters as short as this? :?

Ha! My name is ________! Yeah. We're going to force you to write this whether you know it or not. *plays with Crysi's hair*

I say we make a Trojan Bunny! *sings along*

This might be very helpful for those doing Nano (maybe)!

Haha... you're just jealous you're not in SPEW. :p

Oh, COME ON. Who doesn't know that I'm a sex-obsessed sadist? You just (finally) figured that out? Yeesh... You're a little slow, no? :P

I like the first one too, but the imagery the third one creates is lovely. :)

OOOOH! I love this! It's so weird and haunting and everything that OMG! It's not what I expected at all, but that's fine since it totally exceeded my expectations! And ...

Think of your friends, the people around you. As many of them as you can. Now, how many are of a different race than you? A different religion? Social class? ...

I think you might want to put this in the storybook section. That's where the RPG's (stories that can be added on to by other people) go. ^_^ Storybook section ...