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Hehe, sorry to bug you again, but I got the critique from my teacher. Yay? Yay! Anyway, this is what she had to say to it. Wet sand clung to ...

"Shut up Grif. We have 15 SPEW and YWS forces. I think we should split up into groups of three. 1 cadet to 2 commandos. Cortana has given us some ...

Second Prologue As most of you no doubt know, seeing as you're very intelligent and whatnot, Lloyd Samuel Douglas was a very influential man, but he is almost as mythical ...

First Prologue So, I know what you're thinking. Yeah, Grif writes all these adventures about the SPEW commandoes (which is really funny since TECHNICALLY SPEW doesn't even exist... now how's ...

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We'll make sure that Dreamy and Reas keep a good eye on you. ;)

Welll... you can be our translator! And HA! SPEW EATS KITTENS!

Sadie's father: "...once you’re dead, who knows? It sounds exciting in any case. You’re free from your body.” The freak: “...I wouldn’t be a freak?” Haha... edited for lack of ...

.... just think... you could have a major crisis on your hands here... some people actually like russia. But that's where the beauty of it all comes! Like Russia? Well, ...

Ooo... the edited version? Let me see... how can I say this diplomatically? ME WANNA SEE!

Sir! A problem! Many of the mods are part of SPEW! And I fear Poor Imp might betray us!

ZOMG. Okay. I have tried to hold back my feelings on this for a while, seeing that you're the site admin and I'm the harsh critiquer, but no more! My ...

Um... you're not getting yelled at. This is something we call a critique. So when you put your work into the literary forums, there will be those who come around ...