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Hey Kanade! Lovely poem. I love the sensory images that you had... the chamomile, the flower petals... it brings a softness to the poem which is very lovely and sensual. ...

Teehee. I like this chapter the best. It feels like everything's starting to come together. The only problem is you would have to fit it in somehow. You might be ...

Hey fighta! Interesting story that you have! When I saw your post in the welcome forum, I was afraid that you wouldn't have command of grammar, but your grammar was ...

Hey Ceres! I say "make breakfast" and I say "kitchen", but in reality I'm just trying to force the bread into edible pieces in the room where we keep it. ...

Hey, Kyousuke! Saw you reviewing, so I'd figure I would swing by. :) I noticed that you had to tell what your poem was about at the very beginning and ...

Hey kingolions! This might just be me, but I want to know how she died. Because right now it sounds like she just disappeared, until the last stanza. And I ...

Hey bookgeek! First of all, these girls seem really, really immature. I thought they were in high school, but they're not! So it's a bit weird. Also! Why does she ...

Hey Layla! First of all, I boosted this to a 16+ because of the f-word in it. ;) So, this was a really good piece! I'm glad it's a happy ...

Wait! This seems incomplete! He covers his ears and then the wolves are knocked cold... and then what??? Does Mr. Car A. Rot do anything more? Does he kill them? ...

Hey ultraviolet! :D These were some really cute poems! I always liked limericks... they're so bouncy and playful. :) Anyway, Renesmee's limerick was the best by far. The other two ...

Yay! A historical play! That's what Shakespeare wrote for the most part, you know? ;) Anyway, as far as this play goes, I think I want more. Your story is ...

Hey sare! :D My favorite stanza was the fourth. It was lots of wonderful sensory images that I just adored and, from all the descriptions, you could imagine the relationship ...

Haha, this reminds me of some of my old poems to get into a character's head. Although, like this poem, it wasn't very poetic at all. XD Conflict and such ...

Hey nayex! Lovely poem! I really like the words used and the ideas involved and pretty much all the content. It's quite lovely! The only thing that kind of irks ...

Hey Dante! Maybe this is just me, but I would like to read less about how you're bearing your soul to us and more bared soul... if that makes sense. ...