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Hello ATreeah! I love camp stories! They're just so neat, and they invoke some very fond memories for myself. :) With that said, I think you can definitely expand on ...

Hey Duggie! :D One of my favorite series of all time is the "Time Warp Trio" series. It's insane... and it features guys going into alternate worlds all the time. ...

Hey, Matthemus! This story seems a bit quick! At first, it seems like it's a scene from Aladdin ... then it turns into a world opening up... and then it ...

Hey Chelarose! You have a very beautiful username. :) Now, for your story! I found many of the thoughts very interesting and it was, all in all, written well... always ...

Teehee, I used to love it when my teachers would assign us these sorts of stories. Actually, one of those stories was the thing that started me with creative writing ...

Hey Smexay! Right now, this story needs some direction! Yeah, we're sad that she's sad and writing letters to her dad who has been eight years old, etc. But what ...

Ooooh! I actually really liked this! It's seriously one of my favorite poems on YWS... and that's saying A LOT. *likes* Okay, so now that that's done, there were only ...

Hey Ima! So, this was a kind of dry essay, considering the topic! I don't know... I've possibly read too many first-hand accounts on this to make any brief history ...

Hey Kineta! :D Neat poem! I'm kind of a sucker for the colors too... not very good for the traditional publishing industry, but this isn't geared to be published, I ...

Hey Mary! The best way you can get extra reviews is giving reviews. People will generally avoid works that are bumped, just so you know. ;) Anyway! I thought your ...

Hey observer! :D First of all, you really need to check for silly typos and such! I recommend writing in something like Microsoft Word, which will underline a word red ...

Hey Jigs! I read chapter 2 and I'm still not quite sure what's happening. It's very disjointed! You ended with Maharaj. It just seems strange. As far as the mother ...

Hey Jigsaw! Your other piece looked lonely, but when I looked at it, I realized I had noooo idea what was happening. So it goes! I'd figure I would look ...

Hey Barrett! Comedy is more than just exaggeration... it's also about timing! Right now, this piece is all about exaggeration, but you're ignoring the crucial piece of timing! A couple ...

Hey Demetri! This story is a little bit weird! The sounds "Ahahaha-ahaughhaughhaughaha-AHAHAHA" and "Oh, Charlie, Oh Charlie, OhCharlieOhCharlieOh…Chaaaarrrllliiieeee" make it sound quite humorous,