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Aw, what a cute poem! It kind of reminds me of the Hallmark Cards (you know, the romantic ones) or perhaps a poem that would belong to an illustrated children's ...

Hey zephyrpig! Awesome username, by the way. ;) (Me? Like pigs? NEVER.) I thought this was cool because I definitely got that sort of wicked witch feeling from it... and ...

Hey chanchan! :D This is funny! I giggled through it... just when he starts to sound evil, he acts weird and spastic. And come on, that's pretty hilarious! :D Just ...

Just a quick thing: "The great tubas of pain, wrapped around her stomach, the blood, the blood, the stall floor was slippery with it." Tubas? It just seems a bit ...

Hello! I want to share a poem for you that is totally a Black History poem! Maybe it'll spark your imagination to see great poetry in action! Ballad Of Birmingham ...

I think you should just start with the first chapter. :) I think, in general, most writers think they need a prologue to introduce things that their readers "might miss" ...

Hey, Grinion! :D So! This poem, for the most part, sounded pretty. But it really didn't have much substance to it. The main plot line of the poem is a ...

Hey Timmy! :D Right now, these poems kind of remind me of the psalms (bible thing, if you're not familiar with it). That's not a bad thing, but there's a ...

Leanna! First of all, I thought this was an adorable story! I really liked it a lot. A couple of ideas for you, if you wanted to alter it slightly... ...

Jacke! :D When I tell you it's bad, you believe me and give up the project and stop writing entirely and when I tell you it's good, you don't believe ...

Stewart's "Calculus: Early Transcendentals" Halliday, Resnick, and Walker's "Fundamentals of Physics." Like... I consult those two books waaaaay more than I would like to admit. And without those book

Hey Spike! :D I like these stanzas: As you and I walk along that many tred’d path, Those glorious powers play an eternal game of chess. What is yours is ...

Hey Queen! :D Ah, love and heartbreak! Don't we love them? Well... not really. Nice imagery that you used, about the haunting kiss and such. Some good stuff here! Now, ...

Oooh, nice! I like the rhyme. It helps keep that child-like feeling to it which makes this seem so poignant! Nitpicks! :) Grandma, you meant everything to me. I remember ...

IMP!!!!!!!!! Dude, this poem is teh awesome if only because it raised Imp from the dead. Since, clearly, this poem was the only thing that could do it... one more ...