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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Temperature Coefficient of Reactivity

    Hey Vanadis! This was pretty fantastic! What can I say? Odes to thermodynamic properties are always awesome... I think. I especially like the allusion to nuclear engineering when you say ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Erithean Seas

    Hey Leza! The main thing here is that you introduce a bunch of ideas (like feeling old, the cold sea) but you don't really expand on those ideas at all. ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: broken color

    Hey Toasty O's! Nice poem! I liked it very much, so you're definitely getting a star! The main criticism is that there is so much going on in the painting, ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Banners Torn

    Hey Kelcia! Old-timey poetry? I'm totally in! I like the descriptions and stuff... it reminds me of what little I've seen of medieval times and the like. Awesome? Yes! The ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Wild Horses Of The Sea [Edit]

    What a lovely poem! Definitely a star for you! :D Anyway, these lines was rather odd: But they get back up and run again, because the sea horses feel no ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Secret Winner

    Don't be afraid of people interpreting your poetry as they will... this just means that you've written a complex poem which can be taken millions of different ways. I mean, ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the banjoplayer (for Holly)

    I'm a horrible person, but I didn't like this poem. XD Mind you, compared to the music video, it was awesome, but only because the music video sucked. :P Now: ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dancing To Death

    Hey Leza! I remember you in chat... though you probably don't remember me because I wasn't very talkative at the time. XD Anyway, it's nice to see a story writer ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Hear the Doldrums

    Hey singingsaturdays! :D One of the things that struck me about this poem was the lack of story, which is a bit odd seeing as you posted this in Narrative ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Black Ink [edit]

    It's kind of amazing what sorts of Hollywood stories are actually non-fiction! I think it's awesome. :) These are going to be just general comments, I think, since this appears ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Killing inside

    Hey Kookie! First of all, the title looks quite awful! You may want to edit it so that it's in proper English. Because, really, that's the cool thing to do. ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Ode to the Gambler (Victory)

    Hey Howler! Never seen a poem on here about a gambler... pretty cool! I think it's awesome that you chose that as a subject. :D Now, I have to agree ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Vodka Tonic Promise

    Eek, I didn't see this! Anyway, you probably know by now that I adore your poetry, so I won't go on and on how awesome that is (although you should ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Where Lost Deams Go to Die

    Hi Jasmine! I picked no, but that's only because I pick the worst option for anybody who puts a poll on their story or poem... no offense to you! :D ...

    Jan 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Butterfly Shaped Stains

    Hey RedSmiles! :D Now, I probably have an old school idea about poetry (since that's what I like) but I kind of like it when poets describe the metaphor fully ...

    Jan 10, 2010


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