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Hey July! First of all, welcome to YWS! If you need any help with ANYTHING, feel free to bug me. :) Your poem was lovely! I love the description of ...

Hey Corwin! I think Empress is right on the money when she says that this seems to be more of lyrics than lyric poetry, so if you want me to ...

Hey Caged Heart! :D Welcome to YWS (since I am pretty sure I haven't welcomed you yet)! Your poem was a little odd! At first it was sweet, and then ...

Hey Warrior Princess! :D I actually really liked this poem! It was rhyming and in a weird way, which totally reminded me of Alice In Wonderland ... always a good ...

Unorthodox comments for the win! XD I kind of agree with everybody here. I like your other poem a million times more, but this one is okay and I want ...

I actually really like that line that empress pointed out. I think it's clever. So definitely keep that! :) First! A little question: I'm walking for miles on my broken ...

Hey, CJ... welcome to YWS! :D Oy, hopefully this isn't autobiographical! Poetry takes a bit to learn. My best advice is to read lots of poetry, figure out what you ...

Hey Angel, welcome to YWS! Hope to see you on later. :) My favorite verse is this, actually: Beyond a mini-skirt lies ecstasy and divine galore; the devil laughs with ...

XD This made my day. Anyway, my favorite stanza was the last one. You don't know this, but the precursor to the evil minions was SPEW... and we used to ...

Hey Redbird! One thing that really seemed strange was the amount of passive voice vs. active voice and your use of adjectives and adverbs. And, just in case I sound ...

Hello! This might be because I'm from California, but isn't the internet in your library... free? I mean, it's timed and limited over here, but you don't have to pay ...

Hello there! I like the idea and such. The image of the broken bones scattered everywhere was cool, and let's face it... monsters eating up people is a subject which ...

This sounds more like a blog than an actual work, if that makes sense. There are a lot of people that make subtly humorous and quirky blogs all the time ...

Hi Margaret! :D One of things I found weird was that they really didn't want to seem separated! So I have to wonder... with everything gone, why would they separate ...

Haha, this reminds me of a song called, "Woman in Chains." It goes like this: You better love loving you better behave You better love loving you better behave Woman ...