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Whoa, calm down. If you want reviews, the best thing to do is to review other people. You'll get noticed a LOT easier. :P Anyway... there are a lot of ...

Hi Mentalist! :) I just wanted to ask a bunch of questions which will hopefully be helpful. First of all, I kind of think it's strange. He's a pick pocket ...

Lovely poem! :) I like most of it, but there was a line that I didn't quite enjoy... Just a handful of sand to thrust The way you're using this ...

LOL! Clever way to satirize it all... I find it especially humorous that your reviewers generally didn't catch the satire. ;) My main problem was this: (an inappropriately repugnant word ...

Half-werewolf? I thought you were either full werewolf or nothing. :P Nah, it's your story. Some of it was a bit strange... the parts you described, it sounded like the ...

Hey Quippie! First of all, the poem's text is hideously small. I can barely read it. I don't know if this is your attention (maybe you don't want me to ...

Stop telling us what it won't do and focus on what it does do! Focusing on what it doesn't do doesn't give us a clear picture of the storm, how ...

The good thing is, this thing is short and sweet! Unfortunately, when we read this poem, we finish it and think, "Okay... now what?" You don't really give us enough ...

One of the things that I think is missing is us knowing whether he's dead in the first place. If he is dead, then lose the "followed" in "Behind her, ...

LOL! You kids are crazy! And of course, it amuses me that captain.classy gives a full review... of course! YWS has trained you well. :P One thing: She praised my ...

Hi Katie! Figured I would critique this one. :) Anyway, for the most part, I really liked the poem. Some of it was a little strange, of course. For instance, ...

Did somebody say brutal? :D I'm confused! It would be better to describe who this witch is, what role she played in the story, and why she would kill the ...

Hey Tayla! One thing that kind of confused me... which concentration camp is this? I mean, I'm assuming it's a Nazi-run concentration camp since that's what's typical, but I'm not ...

Hey Selene! This is what I would call a music video poem. You know how some music videos go from image to image without any congruity? This is what this ...

Hey Joy! I did tell you I would look at your stuff? No? ;) I want to point out something to you! Look how many adjectives you have! A satisfied ...