Snoink

Hello! I haven't done a critique in a bajillion years, so sorry! I'm a little rusty. If I end up being too soft or hard, I swear, it's not because ...

So! Some thoughts! :D (Because thoughts are generally awesome.) In your narratives, you're generally more action-oriented with your description. That is, you tend to skimp on the details and go ...

Okay. I basically ranted about the songs of FREAK and how they correlated to the story, including giving examples and little excerpts of the story. So there are spoilers. That ...

Tangent! So first of all, I’m going to post my actual grades. Like I said, everybody did exceptionally well, and yours is no exception. What I graded on was grammar, ...

Hey Evi! So first of all, I’m going to post my actual grades. Like I said, everybody did exceptionally well, and yours is no exception. What I graded on was ...

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Haha! You win at life. The Stephanie Meyer vs. JK Rowling was a bit overdone and not as funny, but the whole Harry Potter and Edward Cullen thing was hilarious. ...

Gahks hey! Snoink hola! Gahks alright? Snoink all right what? Gahks are you alright? lol Snoink haha, yes, I am all right! Gahks say, could you do me a favour? ...

Eek! This is a bit confusing! You're going to want to make it make a little more sense. I love your style because it romps around in a delighted way, ...

Pride and Prejudice, by Jane Austen fact, you really can't go wrong with her, as far as romance novels go! That's just my favorite. I am slightly in love with ...

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You're a hoot! I haven't read this yet. I will, but what the hey! A free bump? Plus, you can't whine about nobody commenting on your work. :P Anyway, gravity ...

Haha, this was cute. ^_^ It needs a bit more conflict though... I would suggest adding a sentence that says something along the lines of, "I wasn't sparkly before" and ...

Lol, next time, critique other writers' stories and guilt trip them into checking this story out. ;) It's essential to do this, especial if you're a historical fiction writer, just ...

Hello! :D We had a member near where you live that had the same avatar, so that's amusing too me! :D But you are newish and stuff, so ha! Anyway, ...