Snoink

Uh... what's with all the abusive and manipulative side notes? Like, "There's nothing you can do to stop me." Or, "You will always come back wanting more." It just strikes ...

Hi Meandbooks! This poem feels like it needs a third stanza. Seeing as your first stanza is about the flaws of your physical body that you see in high definition, ...

This review is brought to you by Mary and the Cry It Out Method in which she screams like a banshee. >.> I am going to be the horrible person ...

Haha! Tina can so easily prove Gemma wrong, if she wanted to,but she doesn't! This amuses me. Tina must be a patient person! She could use politely, "White is a ...

Yeah! VIVA CRISTO REY! *cheers* I recently read Graham Greene's book, The Power and the Glory , and this poem totally reminded me of that. It's about a Mexican priest ...

HI. I love you. Can I bludgeon you with my love? Championing literal underdogs like Turtle is a relatively new passion of mine. I have only been involved in animal ...

Hi! This is going to be a quick and dirty review... Paragraph 2 has no citations. It looks like an introductory paragraph (without the thesis statement), to be completely honest. ...

Hi! I tried to make a poem kind of like this (not about a stillbirth... about a loss of pregnancy) months and months ago, but it turned out really bitter ...

Hi! So... uh... did you misspell Justine Bieber's name on purpose? Or is that supposed to be a thing that you did on purpose? Also, I am probably missing some ...

Ugh. You make all these possibilities sound horrible. It would be like me making a poem about Masculinity and talking about: 1. How men are dominant and tend to rule ...

Hey Griffypoo! The thing that threw me off was this line: "She didn't show up and there aren't any records of her being on station," Grif said; staring blankly at ...

Hi! So, I am kind of hesitant to comment on this much, because I know how much this poem means to you. However, I saw a couple of odd things, ...

I was just thinking about this essay the other day, and now it is a featured work! Coincidence? I think not! First, before I tackle the essay, here's some nit-picky ...

Hi Deanie! Okay... this needs some serious trimming. Too strong you may be, but this reads more like an essay or a blog entry rather than poetry. And, before you ...

Okay! So, I take it you want to make it creepier? My advice is don't give away everything. The first sentence tells a lot . Probably too much. What if ...