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AutophobeX49923 face didn’t show any change in emotion as he searched. Years spent without any direct human contact had rendered facial expressions and body language redundant. This was awkward and ...

to enjoy each others company I'm pretty sure that there should be an apostrophe somewhere in there. Where? Er... I have a confession to make. I am really really bad ...

Haikus aren't supposed to rhyme. :P So your two mentions of "frog" shouldn't be, because technically they rhyme. Not good. :P Play around with it a bit and see what ...

I like this stanza: You said, "I'm glad I met you." I laughed because, well, because. Otherwise... I've learned to expect better from you. ;) And I agree, dark angel ...

For a second, I thought this was Nates's! XD Okay... serious now! I'm going to critique your grammar. Grammar isn't as important in poems as it is in stories, but ...

Oh, the words aren't that old-fashioned. :P "I love upo the rage" What does "upo" mean? "And pierce other's hands" It should be others'. This is because you're talking about ...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... Okay, first of all I did like this. In fact, I tend to like anything of a joyful nature. So! Let's continue from there! Generally, wherever you have a ...

Ooo! It has a lot of potential. :) First of all, I think this can have linebreaks where you put the commas. So it would look like this: Raspberry and ...

I told you your work was always worth waiting for. ;) Okay, grammatically, your guy was rather repetitive in this thoughts. There was one sentence that had anyway twice it ...

Wow... if you could do that in 45 minutes, you're skilled. ;) My main problem was that it was hard to read aloud. Try it... some of the words are ...

My favorite chapter is one. It just seems funnier. :) But all in all, the rush of words is fun. Perhaps you can even put this in poetry form for ...

As a writer, I don't do all of the work. You, as the reader, have to do some too. Interesting thought. One writer developed that thought even further. He was ...

It's okay. There are some parts where the symbolism gets overbearing. "The organ plays a surreal song, while reality waits at the doorways." In this line, the word "reality" sounds ...

Nice and sweet. :) Very tender and sensual too... cool stuff. I will have to kill you though, lol. Read and learn to love. It's a bunch of examples of ...

HA! Suicide poetry is so fun to make fun of. I love the clichéd lines and everything. Howver, I would think it clever to mock some of the suicide poetry ...