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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Sparrow and Spaghetti: Chapter 1 part 1

    ZOMG. I love it. Where is the love button again? He’s 6’2”, and has enough muscle to lift three hundred pounds. I think you should spell it out. Six-foot two-inches... ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Life and Death

    Sorry for being so late! :o Down farther is a mother clung to by two little blond ones and when the mother removes an auburn wig, you know only what ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Ear Tags

    Hi sarebear! :D Okay, there are tons of good things about this poem! For one, I love all the concrete description. It's lovely... probably because it's so specific, lol. I ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sin

    Hello Dragongirl! First of all, I love Areida's suggestions above. They will make your poem soooo much better and it'll turn out to be really good, so definitely give those ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: The POV of a crazy guy

    Hey Octavius! :D Okay, so first of all, this is kind of funny! I mean, I met some Christians who believe that the presence of fatty foods and so on ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Battle Within*Revised*

    Hey DakotaK! :D Hmmm... A lady knight... being pregnant at the heat of the battle?! Already, that is a pretty awkward time. But then to be about to deliver as ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: "Carlsbad": Part II

    Hi Daniel! I told you I would be back, didn't I? ;) Okay! So this definitely seems like it might be a better fit in our novels forum! That way, ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: "Carlsbad": Intro + Part I

    Hey Daniel! I was hoping, when I saw this story, that it would be about the Carlsbad Caverns, and it doesn't look like I will be disappointed! :) Now, about ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: lovesweapt novels

    It sounds like a romance series, or maybe a genre? I am not sure! When I googled up "Loveswept" I found that it talked about a genre instead of any ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Fragile Things

    Hey Katarina! Also... woot! You have an eevee! :D Okay! I have an idea! So, this poem was really... vague. I don't know. I've read a couple of your poems ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Desert Speaks

    Hey Creative Muse! Ooh, I definitely like this one. The idea is fresh and I love the imagery of the woman and the desert. It's very fantastic! Now, because I ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Depressed- why try?

    Hello there, darkfictionboys! :D First of all, I just wanted to let you know that I changed the rating of this poem to 16+, since you said "shit" a lot ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: He Didn't Luv Me Back

    Hey Ebony! Aww, I am sorry things didn't work out that well with your relationship! *snugs* Heartbreak can be a terrible thing sometimes, and I'm sorry that you had to ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Deadly Occupation [contest entry]

    Hey Ranger Hawk! Have I mentioned lately how much I love you? Because I do! Ack, this story was so strange and weird. I don't know if I like the ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: 8th world wonder

    Hey Kirby! I saw this on the request a review page (GO TEAM ROCKET!) and I couldn't resist. :) Now, eek! Monologues! These are really difficult to do because you ...

    Jun 26, 2011


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