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GryphonFledgling, m'dear! I did say I would get to this, didn't I? :D Anyway, quick is a good word to describe this! It did seem a bit quick... and the ...

One more reason why it's good to stop for a bit and restart... rusty or not, this is better than the sorts of things that you've written before. ;) Okay, ...

Blackbird! All right, I liked the story! It was quiet and subtle, it had some great moments of description, I love the focus on the shirt and the mother's reactions ...

Hahaha! This was pretty awesome. I liked your sense of pacing and all the action in the story. In fact, it reads more like an action adventure story than a ...

Hmmm... I liked this, but I never replied! Anyway, I really did like this! It was so crazy and bizarre. I kind of loved it. Juliet is such a ditz ...

Oooh! Your picture is lovely! I love how it accompanies your poem... you are quite an amazing photographer! Also, usually I don't like to comment on age, especially with relationship ...

I totally thought of the Mussorgsky song too! And, it is an awesome song. But you knew this. I looove this piece! I love the whole house with the chicken ...

Okay! So, I don't get it! Why did he keep the porcelain dish if he didn't actually steal it? Also, it sounds like he's really, really guilty, so when he ...

Do you haiku?! Nah, just kidding, obviously you have! :D Okay, so the thing is that you only have a limited amount of syllables in a haiku to pack the ...

DUDE. I lost a shoe the other week... sill can't find it. It's pretty awkward. It's a little black flat and I only lost one of them. In any case, ...

Hi Tangent! :D I love you and your work always, so yay! I love the word play, especially the part where she says she forgets the whether that person is ...

ZOMG, it's wisemann210! Nice to see you back in the literary forums. :D You seem to be developing your poetry style! It's nice to see that. :) My main comment ...

Oh noes! I kind of wish Joy survived... being possessed by demons is never a fun thing, and then to die from it? That's just awful! How did that demon ...

Excellent space imagery here! Plus, have I mentioned how much I like all the scientific references here? And I love how you tied everything in with astronomical phenomenon. The main ...

There's this one song that I love... it's called "Timshel" and it's by Mumford and Sons. Anyway, one of the lines goes like this: And you have your choices And ...