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Hi ashjoy! :D This is cute! It's nice to see a story about a young, romantic couple who is hopelessly in love. :) And the ice cream is a nice ...

Ew, lol. Having lice is never fun! I have a question! Is this body lice or hair lice that we're talking about? They're both a bit different... I've had both ...

Yay for submitting things that you like! :D Okay, this may just be me, but I really, really like juicy stories full of tons of drama. For instance, when I ...

Hmm! This may just be me, but I found this pretty confusing and a bit strange. When I heard that the house smelled bad, I thought at first that this ...

Yay! I am so happy that you're writing this... especially this! It looks like it was ridiculously fun to write. :) First of all, I found a slight typo! When ...

Okay, this is going to sound reeeeeeeeeeeeally nitpicky, but I am kind of a science nerd, so... well... yeah. :P The idea of a world having no gravity is rather ...

Hey snickerdooly! :D So, this poem is a bit long, and I think you can really trim it down into something and make it a lot stronger as a result. ...

Haha, oh dear. How are you supposed to critique something like this? This is very, very, very dorky. And I kind of adore it for that! Just one thing: Buddy ...

Hi sudharsan! :D This poem seems to exist only because of the rhyming. The problem is, it doesn't make sense. For instance, days go by with just sigh? What is ...

Hi Jace! :D So, I read your story and it's a bit interesting. I am unsure of why you used as many adjectives you did, or why you were particularly ...

Woo! Yay! :D Its started off slow, so it was a bit tiresome, but then the dialogue started and it sped up quite nicely. I love their banter, and I ...

Haha! Yay, math class! :D I think you should totally describe the guy more and use all these mathematical innuendo to make it more interesting. So, maybe you can write ...

Yay! Your story had explosions in it. Every story should have an explosion in it! :D Anyway, you have this really exciting beginning! But, it still seems very unfinished and ...

Hi again! Expect me to be annoying you quite a bit, lol. What can I say? Scholarships are awesome and I want you to winnnnn. Anyway, just a couple of ...

XD This poem is not as long as the reviews I've been writing. O.o This made my day. :D Anyway! Your poem! What I noticed was that you would use ...