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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: she

    Oy! I think the last line is something we can hope for all! When you wait for something that is nothing, it is a tragedy. :( I probably wouldn't capitalize ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: An Unsent Letter

    Hey Allie! :) I am going to treat this like romantic fiction because... well... it's in the romantic fiction forum, not the nonfiction forum! So woo! Anyway, a couple of ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The UnBible: The New Testament: The Book of Luke

    Wait, there's more to this story? It's in the short fantasy fiction sections. Do you want me to move it for you? Anyway, a nitpick of sorts! I met her ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Assassin

    Hey Etc! :D Is there any reason why this poem is red, besides the whole bloodiness of the poem? If there isn't any particular reason, or if it's just because ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Delusion

    Dude! I just stumbled on this (yes, I am a horrible stalker and all) and I just wanted to tell you how much I loved it! The ideas... the zombie ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Deserter - Chapter 3, Part 2 (OUTDATED)

    Hi ultraviolet! Sorry I took so long, things got busy on my end! But, I have to admit I'm a bit disappointed that you haven't posted more yet. XD So! ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Lifewish: Prologue

    Ballet! :D I've never done it, but I love stories with ballet. Anyway, the main thing about this piece that I noticed was the dialogue grammar. You definitely need to ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Tower Girls- 2.1

    I told you I would review this! :D First, a typo! Later, I would be driven made by the call used by suitors (though at the same time it was ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Tower Girls- 1

    STELLA. You should have told me that you edited this! But that's okay because Firestarter's review on the next piece made me remember this piece and I was able to ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Deserter - Chapter 3, Part 1 (OUTDATED)

    Ultraviolet! D: I agree with borntobeawriter here... I would really like to have seen a meeting with her and Gavin better. Or maybe a dream. Not a flashback. Not that ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 2 (OUTDATED)

    Yay! I'm back for more! :D I've never read The Hunger Games (I know, I am a horrible person, etc., etc.) so I can't help you with that, unfortunately! :( ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: cinnamon excuses for false urgencies

    Hello! I'll be just reviewing one poem (the first!) because it was interesting and such and I kind of adored it. Plus, I really want to go deep into it, ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Velvet Gravestone - Chapter 1 1/2

    Hey Kyousuke! :D Hm. Post modern? Eh. Well, I guess it is. Kind of. But not really. It's post modern in the way that things don't really mesh together as ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Mirror: Chapter Two

    Micki! :D Okay! I hate to be the one who rains on the parade but... well... I've had a couple of head concussions, and they are not fun. xD I ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Winterland.

    Hey Jasmine! Okay, this was really weird and maybe a bit too short. Part of me wants to say, "It's too abstract!" and the other part of me wants to ...

    May 1, 2011


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