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Hi SassyKat! :D I think it's fine where it is! You didn't really tell a story as much as you expressed feelings and such. So, I think lyric poetry fits! ...

Hello housecat! :D Hmm... you're right! It does feel like there's something missing. I think it's because it's jerky and it doesn't really completely what it wants to say in ...

OH NOES. *flails* First of all, I liked this chapter sooooo much better. It was like, "OH NO. THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!" Which is a good thing to feel in ...

Hey Micki! :D First of all, a couple of typos! “You'll loose braincells if you keep thinking about those things.”

Aw, this is so sad! :( All right, so I don't know if this is based off of a true story or whatever (I hope it isn't!) but I'll pretend ...

I am not looking forward to finishing this novel. It is so good! :D Just a couple of things! I'm not going to do an overall thing again, because the ...

Hey Rosey! :D Okay, you're going to hate me for saying this, but I actually think you went too fast for this! While it's neat to be dumped in the ...

Hey Pink! Just a few nitpicking things first, and then we'll start getting into the meatier parts! “Let me get that for you,” Her father offered, taking hold of her ...

Hello, my favorite leader! :D Crosse raised his head while watching a child trip and land in a puddle. His mother lifted him up and around her waist then jogged ...

Hey ultraviolet! I found one huge error in this piece that rather bothered me: This is the first draft of my new novel The Deserter. I know it's not that ...

Ooers! You have a very clean style of writing! I like it very much. :) In the Prologue, I think it would be best to mention the sons' names! That ...

Hey Kim! :D All right! Now, I'm not against the subject at all because hatred is never good! So, poems that ask for less hatred are awesome. With that said, ...

Hello! :D Okay, so I don't traditionally read horror since it either I get absolutely freaked out or I don't get it. So! Just be forewarned before you read my ...

Hey bluewaterlily! :D Yay! Greek mythology references! :D Okay, so I've just been immersing in Greek epics, such as Homer and Aeschylus, so I'm a bit biased perhaps, but I ...

Hahaha! I like this one better than the other one! I kind of find it difficult to believe that Ned can get away, BUT. The very fact that he got ...