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Shakespeare said that brevity is the soul of wit, and I am inclined to agree with him. You keep on repeating yourself so that this poem seems more like a ...

Hi DeadenedPulse! :D Your poem had excellent ideas! I love the fact that the Son and God and the demons are walking together! It's quite a strange idea. However... maybe ...

Yep! Definitely song material. I would love to see this in some sort of thing in a history class so we can get the history of the wives straight... I ...

Hmm... for some reason, I really didn't find this funny! I think it hits a bit too close to home and stuff. ;) Still! It starts off as a potentially ...

Actually, he isn't 12, lol. He liiiies. But still. Don't put too much worth on people's ages, lol. ;) This is the internet, after all! Just because you're really 20 ...

Hey foxy! I like this line the best: You’re dancing in the middle of a hurricane You’re dying, but enjoying the fatal pain. And that's mostly because the other stuff ...

Total turd. Okay! So, when I was coming up with the Completely Evil Radio show, I really wanted to have a monologue contest between some of the more evil characters. ...

First of all: YOU SUCK AND YOUR FEET SMELL AND YOUR NOSE RUNS. Okay, now that that's done... Making tea is fine, but I kind of like a sense of ...

This is creative nonfiction, not a college application essay. This essay makes you sound like a little girl. However, when they admit you you will be a woman. You want ...

Well! This was interesting! Definitely not a college application... it would get rejected by most schools (translation: DON'T SEND IT IN), but it was certainly interesting as far as literature ...

Haha, this was five types of awesome! Loved the flow, the rhyming was awesome, and the idea was stellar. So, basically, awesome work! If you want to make this poem ...

Haha! I love it! :D One thing that I would kind of like... what kind of person is he? I'm guessing he is a musician snob... because hey! Musician snobs ...

Hi J.R.S.! Yes, it's sappy, but who doesn't love a sappy poem? Look at this: Forever and Always, what does it mean to me? It means just that, that I ...

Should I be talking about love? I have heard that I am supposed

Teehee! The different aspects of this story are strange to me, being an American. I forgot that arranged marriages still happened... and the idea that the chief's son would marry ...