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Ooers! A question... are you evoking Dreamtime stories? Because I was totally thinking that as I read this, due to your imagery of the rainbow snake. Mind you, I would ...

The first one is waaaaay cooler than the second one because it has more personality in it. Mind you, towards the end of it, it kind of felt like a ...

PFFT. We overthrew you once -- don't make us overthrow you again! :D Plus, we totally came up with the first dictionary... which means we standardized it first. The Brits, ...

Noooo. This is not a story. This is a navel-gazing piece of work that really has no grounding in reality and tries to hide what really is going on. See, ...

Hehehe! This is an adorably cute poem. :) Just one tiny error... it should be this: "There’s something about the fall effect, affects me through and through." So just switch ...

Hmm... interesting! I would like to have some sort of idea about what this person is... or creature. I'm not quite sure! I also want to know if there was ...

I think having eleven sets of tildas would be better so as to symbolize the eleven dimensions of string theory. Twelve seems to be a bit weird... it looks even, ...

Hmmm... interesting! So, basically, they interact with each other in their dreams? That's a pretty neat idea! One thing that I might do is describe exactly how Sophie and Emelia ...

Hmmm... This poem has two major parts of it that are wholly unconnected with each other. One has to do with the learning of language and the other has to ...

Very Twilight-Zone of you! I like it. :) Then again, I'm kind of a sucker for science fiction, lol. Plus, it's science fiction that talks about the consequences of technology... ...

That's when you do a full body wax! :o Nah, I'm just kidding. I like your piece. Though, it's pretty sad! Having no heart is generally a bad thing! Although, ...

Hey Yuriiko! :D Basically, I think the other guys are right. It's cute, but it doesn't have any substance. I think it would be funnier if you included some more ...

Hey guys! Let's put this back on track. Keep comments about the reviews of the poem only! No commenting on comments. Veiyloxx! If you do not want to get anymore ...

The title was pretty much the definition of awesome! Juts one question though... how would the world be colorless and school be not boring with these socks? It's a bit ...

Try putting the boy more into the poem. Right now, the leaves seems to have a bigger part than he does. It would be nice to see the leaves do ...