Snoink

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DUN DUN DUN! Cliffhanger! Get on it, man! :P

I think this is the poem that you've been wanting to write for all these years. It's lovely. :)

One thing I noticed was the fact that she's awake this whole time. You throw in a line about how the anesthetic isn't allowed, but why not? I should think ...

I want something dark, yet sets the style of the universe my novel has. What sort of style does your universe have? :)

Hahaha, yes. In general, it's a bad thing to have to explain a story to somebody. :P It totally ruins the punchline. And, it's not the idea really, just the ...

*Moved to Action/Adventure*

Eek, this was written more than four years ago! *Locked*

This poem is almost five years old. ^^ *Locked*

I have to say I think some people on this site are far too anal, I mean I thought I was anal, damn. I love your style, the imagery is ...

Fixed the italics. Next time, make sure you don't disable BBCode. ;D

I have to say, I liked the original one better. This is locked.

Er... sorry. Just saw the request for the cast of characters! The cast of characters was this: NATE --Nate JENNAFINA --Jenna TEAGUE --Teague JUNIPER --Juniper SNOINK --Snoink --Darkheart --Announcer V

XD I totally didn't notice that it was in lyrics. Moved!

Jenna's script, by the way, said this at the end of Act 6: TEAGUE Nate, I love you. You’re so evil. NATE Not as evil as you. I’ve heard what ...