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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: When Two Worlds Collide - Chapter One

    Hey, Lau here for a review! I really enjoyed this and I definitely like the main character. I like where this is heading also and I was entertained threw the ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Princess of Hades- chapter one

    Did you just the kill the main character in chapter one? Impressive. Welcome to YWS!!! *bursts out balloons* I'm sorry I can't review...currently on my phone. You should be glad...I'm ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: to be a boy, raised as a girl

    This was really beautiful.well done. I have already hit the like button.

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Guardians- Chapter 2.1

    Great, dessert is what I meant! duh! Have you never seen an empty dessert?

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Guardians- Chapter 2.1

    Only thing I will reveal is that Robin is no one. Sorry.

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Dream Sequence 5/5

    Fine, you don't have to be banished... *Unbanishes*

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Dream Sequence 5/5

    Fine, you don't have to be banished... *Unbanishes*

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Guardians- Chapter 1.2

    Yep, she had two dads. Paps and Daddy Joe. I will work on the spelling mistakes. I'm not english, so its a little harder for me. Thanks for the advice, ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Guardians- Chapter 1.3

    I have never liked anyone's review more than yours. Should I tag you when I post another chapter?

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Guardians- Chapter 1.2

    Thank you! I will defenitely follow that advice!

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Guardians- Chapter 1.1

    I love your idea that Lu speaks to her about the fire and that will defenitely go in. Thanks for the review!

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Tryal's Curse 3.1

    It was "an" exceptionally rude someone That's all I got...gosh, I do not want to know what your stories are like when you do like them, because this would be ...

    Aug 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Humor Re: Dating The Grammar Police

    So many grammar mistakes, I can't even.....

    Aug 25, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: 30 Day Writing Challange.

    Thank you.

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: true love

    I like this a lot. Well done!

    Jul 18, 2015


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein