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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Prey

    I really like the atmosphere you created throughout this piece. The predator and prey dynamic feels intense and almost hypnotic, and the repetition of running, stumbling, bleeding, and being chased ...

    May 27
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: hollow

    I really like how direct and personal your poem feels. The emotions come across very clearly. There's a strong sense of loneliness, hurt, and frustration that makes it easy for ...

    May 3
  • Short Story » Narrative, Humor Re: One Wolf, Three Pigs, and Several Unfortunate Accidents.

    Awesome story you have here, so let me review it! :D I really like the distinct voice you built for Horace W. Ólf (or whatever the name is). He is ...

    Feb 12
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Horror Re: Sophia’s scares

    I'm still a bit new to reviewing, so apologies if this isn't very great of a review. I really like how you captured Sophia's perspective (of, well, a young child). ...

    Feb 4
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Unravelling

    This is my first review so apologies if it is not very good. I really love how you structured the poem and each rather action-packed verb. The process really reads ...

    Oct 27, 2025


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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