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Hey Ark! Night back for another review. ^-^ Apologies if it's all over the place, I'm just going to say what comes to mind as I look through the chapter. ...

Hey there, Ark! Night here for this lovely Review Day. :) So to start off, I really, really love this chapter. I love the mysterious plot line, the descriptions, the ...

Hey there, Rainbow! Nightcrawler here for a short review on this lovely Review Day! :) Well, I'm going to be honest here. This is really more of a synopsis of ...

Hey Noelle! Thanks for tagging me. :) I hope Nano has been going well for you. I'll try to rip this apart as nicely as possible. ^-^ I'm going to ...

Hey Maddie! I'm here as promised. :) I hope you've been enjoying YWS so far! If you have any more questions, don't hesitate to ask! So first off, I really ...

Hey Ganga! Sorry this took a while, I had to have surgery for wisdom teeth and kept falling asleep. Anyway, onto the review! I felt that this was a bit ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS. :) I'm Night, here for Review Day. This is an interesting introduction. I felt that you did a decent job of avoiding info dumping, and ...

Hey grill! Happy Review Day. I apologize ahead of time for this review; I very rarely attempt to review poetry, much less beautifully crafted ones such as this. I'll do ...

Hey little sis! A review, as promised. :) Happy Review Day. So first off, this is a very cute idea. I liked how you started with one child's obsession over ...

Hey Ganga! Happy Review Day! I really do apologize for being so slow to get to this. Life has been truly insane lately. Please forgive me. >.< I thought that ...

Hey Ganga! Night here, and happy Review Day! Unfortunately, today is pretty busy for me, so this will probably be shorter. I really only caught one grammatical error: His blonde ...

Hey Mess! Night here for a short review. :) Grammar/ nitpicks first: ON the table beside a steaming cup of coffee was a small white envelope closed tight by a ...

Hey Kanome! Night here for a quick review. So first thing's first. I think the reason that there haven't been many reviews on this is because it's a huge block ...

Hey Mess! Night here for a short review! Seems like TriSARAHtops always says what I notice. :P So I caught only one error, I think: blue tin pot steaming bubbling ...

Hey Ganga! Here for another review. :) Wowie. This chapter was fabulous. It flowed so well, and the characters were so well rounded that I hardly have any nitpicks at ...