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Re: A Dog Who Witnessed a Terrorist Attack
I'm genuinely curious. Was there a reason for that depiction? Were you trying to relate him to the parents at the scene somehow?
Dec 18, 2014 -
Re: A Dog Who Witnessed a Terrorist Attack
Hey DrFeelGood. I appreciate you trying at a poem about such recent horrific events, and I think you are trying to get a good message across, but here's the thing. ...
Dec 18, 2014 -
Re: "I'm starving."
Thank you! I based this off of a trip I took to Kenya, and what I see in my own country. Thanks again!
Dec 18, 2014 -
Re: thread spools and statistics were never good therapists
Thanks for the review! I'll look into that.
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: A moderator, a YWSer, and a monkey walk into a bar
This made me cry. I thought it would be a joke, but it was so touching instead. Thank you.
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: if i could do it all over again, i'd run a little slower
Wow. Thank you for such a beautiful review. This means a lot. Poems are so incredibly hard to review, yet this is one of the best I've received. Thank you. ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: if i could do it all over again, i'd run a little slower
Thank you. :)
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: if i could do it all over again, i'd run a little slower
Thanks for the review! I'll definitely look into that. :)
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: Interrobang Awareness
How has this not been introduced to me‽ We can make this a thing. It's too cool to be passed up. *nods* :D
Nov 24, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny : Chapter 9
No problem! I really liked it. :)
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: the sound of snow falling
Thank you!
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: the sound of snow falling
Thank you!
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: the sound of snow falling
Thanks Gravity! The format for the poem that I was trying for was that the first stanza was from the girl's POV, then the guy's, then together. Hope that helps ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: the sound of snow falling
Thank you!
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: the sound of snow falling
Yes, that is the concept. First the girl POV, then guy, then both. :) Thanks!
Nov 8, 2014