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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Hat Man.

    Hello! First of the description..,,a poem which is not about love'' totally made me click the link, it's so great that you chose something else. Now to the review itself ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Off the Edge

    Hello! I really like how you out lyrics in there, I love ,,If I die young'' myself so it was even more amazing to read. “…funny when you’re dead how ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Because I Am Afraid

    oh wow! I really like this piece of work,it's brilliant and honestly I can hardly find anything you could improve on. So I am just gonna point out my favourite ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Culture Re: Digital age, I'm a lover

    Hello! First off, I think you covered a really important topic: Machines replacing social interactions and the resulting isolation and loneliness. I've been looking for work like this for quite ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: In the beginning of the story,

    Hello :) Quite a piece of work! Really intresting and deep. I think it's great how you connected the begging to the end with ,,Her hair is a wig growing ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Deafening Silence

    Hey! :) Ahh war-realated poetry is always so intresting. You totally managed to give me a feeling of insecurity and yet the longing for power! Also I really like that ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Change The World

    Hello! My first impression of this poem was good, I read a lot of war related literature and this really reminded me of it. However I am not sure in ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: One Day

    One word: wow. I read this once and layed back to think about it for a second. I think its amazing how you portray the pressire there is (thats how ...

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: sweet summer

    Hello, I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love how ,,easy'' it goes of your tongue when you read it out loud. It really gives me quite a summery feeling, ...

    Jan 1, 2014


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
— soundofmind