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Re: The Hat Man.
Hello! First of the description..,,a poem which is not about love'' totally made me click the link, it's so great that you chose something else. Now to the review itself ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Off the Edge
Hello! I really like how you out lyrics in there, I love ,,If I die young'' myself so it was even more amazing to read. “…funny when you’re dead how ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Because I Am Afraid
oh wow! I really like this piece of work,it's brilliant and honestly I can hardly find anything you could improve on. So I am just gonna point out my favourite ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: Digital age, I'm a lover
Hello! First off, I think you covered a really important topic: Machines replacing social interactions and the resulting isolation and loneliness. I've been looking for work like this for quite ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: In the beginning of the story,
Hello :) Quite a piece of work! Really intresting and deep. I think it's great how you connected the begging to the end with ,,Her hair is a wig growing ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: Deafening Silence
Hey! :) Ahh war-realated poetry is always so intresting. You totally managed to give me a feeling of insecurity and yet the longing for power! Also I really like that ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: Change The World
Hello! My first impression of this poem was good, I read a lot of war related literature and this really reminded me of it. However I am not sure in ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: One Day
One word: wow. I read this once and layed back to think about it for a second. I think its amazing how you portray the pressire there is (thats how ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: sweet summer
Hello, I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love how ,,easy'' it goes of your tongue when you read it out loud. It really gives me quite a summery feeling, ...
Jan 1, 2014
