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I'll have a proper look at this for ya in the morning...well later morning? :P

Thanks for the advice! I shall put it into a spoiler now! :)

Well, he started panicking because he was aobut to wet himself...and it was because he drank loads. :D He finally felt we and he felt like his victims had when ...

This is wonderful! Short and straight to the point...good job! -Sop-

Cheers for the lovely comments, everyone! Do check out my other 'Poems With Morals'. :)

Thank you!!! :)

Thank you very much, Lele. :) I'm working on some more so I'll put them on here as soon as possible!

Thank you so much! Lele, it took me about 3 hours to write the poem and edit it. :)

No problem! :)

The Millenium Trilogy by Steig Larsson is amaaazing. Everybody who loves to read should read those books!

This is brilliant! Really easy to read and it flows perfectly. The repetition is well-placed and the fact that the story seems kind of unfinished really works here. Keep Writing! ...

Wow, this is reallyyy good. I've experienced these feelings when a good friend of mine left and now we hardly have any contact. But you can apply these feelings to ...

Hey Skins! :) Haha, don't worry about it...we all get busy with work at some point. For such a short extract I think you've given me some great, helpful comments, ...

Thanks DeadEnds! Yup, that was pretty helpful! :D I have no experience with Alzheimer's but I find the subject fasinating, that's why I'm working on the idea. So, hearing about ...

Hey Cass! Thanks! Yes, I'm really interested in the topic to! But it's really complex so it'll probably take time! I'm starting to get a feel for the plot in ...