Sorsha2

Hello, I am new the to young writers society and this is my very first post on this site. Please offer and constructive criticism as I know I desperately need ...

As per the suggestion of my very first reviewer I have posted the next part of the story in a small portion. In this scene we are introduced to the ...

* continuation of chapter one part a and the end of chapter one* “It’s the senate.” Sorsha said at last, her voice cool and calm but undeniably firm and authoritative. ...

Here is the first half of chapter two from my story. Reviews, critique and comments are welcomed and appreciated ************** Chapter Two***************** Dismounting her steed with speed and precis

Okie dokie - here is the second half of chapter two.... This scene continues after a small break in time from chapter two part a. Any comments, critiques would be ...

Hello everyone, here is the first part of chapter three. The story is beginning to build up momentum so I hope you enjoy. Comments/ reviews are welcomed and appreciated. ****